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by Nate Winter on Thursday 05-20-2010 0 Comments Tags: This post focuses on a specialty of mine, writing copy. "Copy," by the way, is an advertising term that just means "writing." The words in any kind of ad or marketing material are called copy. For example, the headline on that billboard: it's copy. The "About Us" verbiage on your website: copy. The bullet points in your brochure: they're copy too. So that's what we're talking about here.
Address the customer directly Write as if you were speaking with the customer face-to-face. Address customers as "you" instead of referring to them as "customers." It's more personal and more comfortable. Do this: Call us at 800-999-8888 or email us. We'd love to hear from you. Not this: Customers may contact our service department by phone at 800-999-8888 or by email. Exclaim with words, not punctuation You want customers to get excited about your company and your product, but, let me assure you, exclamation points are not the right way to excite people. Exclamation points are a cheap thrill and they're so often overused in promotional advertising. Think: used car salesmen, TV infomercials, and overly anxious telemarketers. The problem with these types of marketing is that they use exclamation points too much, especially in reference to things that aren't very exciting. And that causes customers to tune those messages out. So don't go there. Instead, take the high road and communicate an idea that grabs the reader's attention on its own. It could be exciting, interesting, funny, clever—you name it. When it's really good, you won't need a punctuation mark to convey excitement. And your customers will notice. Admittedly, exclamation points do have a time and a place. If and when you use them, I recommend doing so discerningly, infrequently and one at a time. End sentences with prepositions I'm not recommending you always end sentences with prepositions, but don't be afraid to do so when it feels natural. Although it's not grammatically correct, ending sentences with a preposition is just part of the way we speak nowadays. And it doesn't cause any confusion, so go for it. The alternative is copy that's riddled with instances of "for whom" and "of which.&" And no one wants to read that. So that's it for this week. Give some of these techniques a try and let me know what you think. And if you have some writing tricks of your own, please feel free to share them by commenting below. Search Pomeganda Recent Posts » Pomegranate Goes the Distance for Warner Bros. » Pomegranate’s Twitter-Chat Gadget to Be Used During Paul McCartney Benefit Concert » Pomegranate's HP Brand Channel Chosen as One of YouTube's Best » Dawes Fiestas With Ford on the Road to Bonnaroo » How to Write Customer-Friendly Copy » Pomegranate and Google Make Fireworks » Dawes Makes TV Debut on Late Late Show » Not Your Average Droid Review: Simplify Your Life and Get Social! » Ready for an Innovative Mobile Network? giffgaff’s Got Your Number (in Scotland, anyway) BlogRoll » Mashable » PsdTuts+ » Say Mayday | Journal of music, style, and art. |
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